My very first composed song

My very first composed rock ballad
 

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Cqb2cZqX4Nc

I liked it -- especially the backing track and the chorus. I think if you changed your verses to include notes other than the root of the chord, it could give them more interest. Also, the key change in the middle was a little jarring. Would it be better if you didn't have the rests in between?

Good job, and thanks for sharing!

Nice work, man. I'm just not so sure if I would use that heavy guitar as a base if you talking about a rock ballad. It felt a little bit uncomfortable at first but then you get used to it as the song goes by.