My first composition with Studio One

Hi guys,

I just found this forum and signed up straight ahead. And so this is my first post here.
Something about my composition. Like the title says, it is my first composition I did with Studio One. Also this is one out of 3 total composition, I used to apply to some music universities, to show, how far my skills are.

But I also wanted you guys to evaluate it and maybe give me some tipps.  
Hope you like it :)

I was expecting a more morbid sound with a title like 'Antagonist'. But this will work. This is good. 

8 minutes ago, Esper said:

I was expecting a more morbid sound with a title like 'Antagonist'. But this will work. This is good. 

 

Yes, many people suppose that. But for me, it tells more like a story, how this person became an anatagonist, or like the emotional inside of this person.

cool, I'd take a second look at the accelerando passage starting around 01'38'' though, especially the rhythm of the choir... 

and... I like the changes, but I think each section could "breathe" more... give the sound more chance (e.g.: time )

nice work!