"Marcia Funebre" for piano

"Marcia Funebre" for Piano

Here a little funeral march that proably I will generate a more developed pice from it:

Marcia Funebre (3).mp3

Marcia Funebre.pdf

Open for suggestion and feedback!

ADVICE! The dynimic notation is still not finished.

It's very dramatic and intense. The growling low octaves create a dark atmosphere. A couple things:

Clefs: I think writing in the baritone and bass 8vb clef is a bit unusual. It's better to write with a bass clef for the right hand.

Bar 7: These A#s would be better to write as Bbs.

Have you any plans to make this longer? I think it seems a bit short and underdeveloped - it has a lot of potential.

Thanks @aMusicComposer a lot for your feedback and suggestions! 🙂 🙂 🙂 

14 hours ago, aMusicComposer said:

Clefs: I think writing in the baritone and bass 8vb clef is a bit unusual. It's better to write with a bass clef for the right hand.

The baritone clef was my mistake! I did not realised that I had put a baritone clef!!!! Thanks a lot for advicing me!

14 hours ago, aMusicComposer said:

Bar 7: These A#s would be better to write as Bbs.

When It comes to sharps and flats I havo no idea. I have changed the key signature to D minor/ F major. I do not know if that solves the problem? Well.. anyways  thanks!

14 hours ago, aMusicComposer said:

Have you any plans to make this longer? I think it seems a bit short and underdeveloped - it has a lot of potential.

I do have but right now I'm blocked !!!😞 no inspiration...

Well, for a third time thanks a lot!!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂 

Here the corrected score:

The second score looks a lot better in my opinion. Putting the key signature to D minor did resolve those accidentals.

9 hours ago, Hendrik Meniere said:

I do have but right now I'm blocked !!!😞 no inspiration...

Don't worry about it! There will come a time when you will find the inspiration to complete this. It's a great start you've got so well done!