Rise Of The Ancient Guardian (Epic Orchestral Music)

Hello everybody! 

So I wanted to make a new music video again but thought I'd get some comments about the song first. It's a bit older again so it's actually the first time I'm asking for feedback on this one.

Without telling much I'll just throw in the song. Hope you can enjoy it 😊

String entrance way too loud. 
The entire fast didn't hold my interest until the beat 1 and 2 hits near 3:25. After that it was fine, but before that the whole thing just flatlined for 2 minutes.

Thank you for your review @Monarcheon!

Yes after reading your review I can agree that the intro is too loud. I was planning to remake some tracks because I got a different strings setup now. Might be worth the time to try this composition with new strings. Would rework the Intro and middle part as well then. 

Thank you again 🙂👍

Yes I can agree that more buildup and dynamics can be added in first part of song. Maybe a longer dip somewhere to buildup once more. Although really nice sounds for being synthetic, where are they from?

Thank you for your reply @ApeInSpace!

Yes some more dynamics or even a calm part to give some contrast might work. But I'm actually planning on making it a bit shorter. Gotta see first if working on the dynamic can change it to the better though.

About the libraries I used:

Strings - Audiobro LA Scoring Strings 2

Brass - Cinesamples CineBrass 2

Harp - Cinesamples CineHarp

Percussions - EastWest Symphonic Orchestra Gold Edition / Cinesamples Drums of War 2

I'm actually looking to get some new libraries especially for percussions. But on strings I already switched to "Cinematic Strings 2".