My Time, Has Ended...

Tone Poem

My Time, Has Ended

My time, has come to an end...

Has come to an end

Never forget me

My time, has come to an end...

Has come to an end

I won't forget you...

I definitely was able to feel the mood of the piece right away, and it made perfect sense with the poem. It's a large instrumentation. I think you handled it well. You didn't just have the entire band blasting away all the time, and the moments with just a few parts going were really nice. 

If I had a critique (and this is just a personal preference thing), I thought it could use maybe one other main idea. I felt like the mood stayed the same throughout. If that's what you want, it's great. And like I say, I think it really captures the feeling of the poem. I just would like some other "vibe" to compliment and contrast the primary one.

Other than that ambiguous comment, I don't have anything else to say other than that it sounds nice and the score looks well done. I always enjoy a clean looking score.

Good job!

Very well written. The thematic material develops nicely. The orchestration is good. 

The contrapuntal technique is superb in this piece. I do wish I could have seen the main theme a little more developed -but I think you did a good job (I probably would've developed a tad bit differently -but then again, we all would.) 

Good work!