L'étoile ( The Star )

Hey everyone ! 

I'd like to share with you my first composition which is " L'étoile " ( the star in french) 

I hope you enjoy it 🙂

See ya

J.Kaw

© Julien_Kaw

version_finale_etoile.mp3

Hey, welcome to the forum!

This sounds very nice, and is well built!

Perhaps it could benefit from beign less "loopy". I mean, there's quite enough contrast and there are some very surprising turns throughout the piece, but I believe it would be more fluid if you wrote it without looping the harmonies too much. Just a thought, it already sounds quite good.

The orchestration and arrangement is very good, and helps a lot with making it sound fresh throughout.

1:47 feels veeery pleasing.

Congratulations on your first piece, it's a very solid win!

Thank you !! 

Very dramatic! The structure and atmosphere seem very theatrical to me, so this could be well suited for a movie or tv score. Maybe some kind of documentary about space? That's what it sounds like to me at least. That was a very satisfying moment at 1:48! Nice job and I hope you keep posting here! Feel free to review others' music also, even if you don't feel confident about it. People like to hear feedback even if it's something simple!

1 hour ago, KJthesleepdeprived said:

Very dramatic! The structure and atmosphere seem very theatrical to me, so this could be well suited for a movie or tv score. Maybe some kind of documentary about space? That's what it sounds like to me at least. That was a very satisfying moment at 1:48! Nice job and I hope you keep posting here! Feel free to review others' music also, even if you don't feel confident about it. People like to hear feedback even if it's something simple!

 

Thank you !