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I would revoice some of your low intervals so they resonate more - moving them up in the tenor register. Either simply move it up in the chord or invert the interval.

You B-flats should be spelled A-sharp

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I really like the duple-vs-triple that you incorporated between the two hands! You might want to consider expanding the piece, though - it's over very quickly. However, the harmonies are really nice - I love the resolution in m.6. Great work!

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