jawoodruff Posted December 30, 2019 Posted December 30, 2019 Lovely piece. Almost reminds me of a rusty music box. My only thought is to perhaps expand the material into more tonal regions -might add another depth to it. Otherwise, good work! Quote
bryla Posted December 31, 2019 Posted December 31, 2019 I would revoice some of your low intervals so they resonate more - moving them up in the tenor register. Either simply move it up in the chord or invert the interval. You B-flats should be spelled A-sharp Quote
jwpianist Posted January 3, 2020 Posted January 3, 2020 I really like the duple-vs-triple that you incorporated between the two hands! You might want to consider expanding the piece, though - it's over very quickly. However, the harmonies are really nice - I love the resolution in m.6. Great work! Quote
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