The Wayfarer Within

About journeying inwards, the adventure that happens within while adventures are taking place outside. This is my first upload here, just putting it out there for any comments or suggestions 🙂 

I'm not making music professionally... yet. But I hope to do!

Btw how do I add from soundcloud? doesn´t seem to work 😮

On 1/6/2020 at 6:02 PM, ApeInSpace said:

Btw how do I add from soundcloud? doesn´t seem to work 😮

Try pasting a link to the web page in which the piece is played?

This could have been great for a game, sounds like a Zelda-adventure, with a sound a little darker.

I think you should consider changing the balance of the piece, in many places the bass and accompaniment are louder than the melody itself.

Around 2:50 it changes flavor, you add some interesting drums and choir, but then it's lost quickly afterwards.

I think you should keep these, although it's not bad the way it is.

Also I see that you're a new user so you should note that notes will probably get you the best reviews. I can't give a good analysis only by ear. 

Some strange polychords built up in the climactic section. It does create some tension, but mostly I just get confused by the voice leading whenever there's a cadence.