'The Sea of the Soul' (Piano Rhapsody)

This is one of my longer works; just finished it today, so yay! I could really used some feedback for future versions, though. The formatting is also a little suspect, as are the harmonies, perhaps. I was going for an Impressionistic style. It is inspired by the journey of the Christian faith. 

Its a nice listen. I do think the constant jumps back down the piano in the left hand are very difficult (but possible). I think more variation in both hands would be good, as the patterns are pretty much the same throughout the whole piece. The end was a nice change.

Also, if played on a real piano, following the pedal notation would make the piece sound quite muddy. It does work here though.

4 hours ago, edfgi234 said:

Its a nice listen. I do think the constant jumps back down the piano in the left hand are very difficult (but possible). I think more variation in both hands would be good, as the patterns are pretty much the same throughout the whole piece. The end was a nice change.

Also, if played on a real piano, following the pedal notation would make the piece sound quite muddy. It does work here though.

 

Thanks! Yeah, I got a bit lazy with the left hand! XD And yes, when I played some of this on a real piano, I changed the pedal three times a measure, as opposed to once. I'll have to go and add it back in. I appreciate the feedback! :3