Fighting the Dragons

Hi,

I wrote this piece with an intention of taking just five simple notes (which are the first five notes of the lick by the way) and turn it into a memorable motif. Here is the result:

I would appreciate any feedback, not only on the music but on the production part as well (eg. mixing).

I'll attach a score on this post, just in case.

Finally, there is another piece that I wrote recently and which I published in the "Large Ensemble" section. However, now I feel it might have been more appropriate to post it here. So, if you have time and you haven't seen that piece go check that out as well: https://www.youngcomposers.com/t39092/bloody-mercenaries-feedback-or-thoughts-on-my-piece/. I would appreciate it a lot.

Again, I would really love to hear your thoughts!

Vocals are extremely automated. I don't know if that was the intention... But for this kind of pieces I like to hear or more reverb or more warmth 

Transition to B-flat minor sounded really random; came out of nowhere and left very quickly. 

this obviously took a lot of knowledge, skill and intelligence. I would not be surprised if I see your name in movie credits someday.

Thanks for the feedback everyone!