My First Piece (for piano)

Hi, I am new to this forum and this is my first completed piece of music (other than fragments of melody). I will be very thankful if anyone point out my error or give some advice. 

No1 Song for Piano.mp3

No1 Song for Piano.pdf

Not bad ideas in a ¿pop? context.

But the piano has many more possibilities I suppose you'll be discovering bit by bit.

On 2/5/2020 at 2:02 AM, Luis Hernández said:

Not bad ideas in a ¿pop? context.

But the piano has many more possibilities I suppose you'll be discovering bit by bit.

 

Thanks for your comment. I didn't have a particular style in mind when composing.

But I will find out more about the piano.😀