Delicious Grace - Wonder

Hey guys! We've got a new song out: ''Wonder''. Hope you enjoy it.

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My previous songs:

https://www.youngcomposers.com/t35836/new-sound-delicious-grace/

https://www.youngcomposers.com/t37009/delicious-grace-the-boy-from-memphis/

https://www.youngcomposers.com/t37305/delicious-grace-chaos-and-shame/

https://www.youngcomposers.com/t37476/delicious-grace-nocturnal/

https://www.youngcomposers.com/t37761/delicious-grace-queen-of-england/

https://www.youngcomposers.com/t38464/delicious-grace-desperate/

Lyrics: Wonder

What have you done to yourself you wonder?
Your time has come and passed and makes you wonder
Life is really tough sometimes you wonder
There’s no help in sight and so you wonder

Today is Monday morning and you still wonder
The day after tomorrow you’ll do aswell
This idea is stuck into your head
Where are you going ? I’m sorry but I can’t tell

chorus:
When I look to the sky
And your name come to mind
All I see is special lights

Always bright like the sun
All the colors on the lawn
You remember me of neon lights

What you shoud’ve never do
Is look to the ground!

You said it happend all again
Is your life really coming to and end?
There’s no point saying that they need
You already made f*cking bad decision!

chorus:
When I look to the sky
And your name come to mind
All I see is special lights

Always bright like the sun
All the colors on the lawn
You remember me of neon lights

What you shoud’ve never do
Is look to the ground!

Voice and guitar tradeoffs are interesting, but the rest of this is rather flat to me (not in the pitch sense, necessarily). Some texture changes with the guitar sound or your more out-there chords could be brought out more in little moments.

On 3/6/2020 at 8:54 PM, Monarcheon said:

Voice and guitar tradeoffs are interesting, but the rest of this is rather flat to me (not in the pitch sense, necessarily). Some texture changes with the guitar sound or your more out-there chords could be brought out more in little moments.

 

Thanks for giving it a try.