emotional multisegmented piece for flute and piano, unfinished

hi this is emotional beginning of a piece for piano and flute or other soloist, that is unfinished. i wanted to share this, but i have hesitated it first since it is only a beginning. it is though already 5 minutes long.

i think the first 3 'episodes' or segments are good but after about 2.36 the music comes too straightforward, i want to put slow part somewhere after 2.36 that is in the second mp3 and note. the third mp3 and note that i have made related to the piece doesn't seem to suite to the whole, but its there still.

I like it!

A little disjointed, and some strange notation of accidentals (i.e. A sharp and Bb at the same time in piano), but the ideas have potential 🙂

Gustav

I like the lead at 1:10 minute and the lick at 1:16 i think at 1:23 it would be sweet if you went back into a modified version of the lead up and then back into the lick one more time. Wouldn't affect the next section since you have a break and movement change.