What's wrong with this piece?

It's a planet earth-y style orchestral piece. I've got my own theories, but fresh ears are always a huge plus! Don't hold back:

you have a great ear and a good sense of "what goes where". I don't see anything wrong with this!

3 hours ago, Left Unexplained said:

you have a great ear and a good sense of "what goes where". I don't see anything wrong with this!

 

Thanks for the kind words. I wasn't sure if the sections played well off each other but I'm pleased that the track holds up - after too many plays it gets hard to tell!

Nothing's wrong with it, but if I had to nit pick I'd say that the rhythm section should be more involved, more elaborate, more continuous. And also I think it's a tad to loud, recording wise.

20 hours ago, Ken320 said:

Nothing's wrong with it, but if I had to nit pick I'd say that the rhythm section should be more involved, more elaborate, more continuous. And also I think it's a tad to loud, recording wise.

 

I agree, the rhythm section is a bit lacklustre. Definitely something I need to work on in future pieces. Thanks for the tips.

It's very good nonetheless.

That's very well-produced. Seriously, it's just a great job.

I also don't know why this topic is named "What's wrong with this piece", as I don't see anything that could really be called a problem.