Celestial Spirit [Rough Draft]

Hey all, 

I finished a rough draft of a work and need feedback on its orchestration, playing techniques, etc. I will adjust any notational errors later as I have not proofread the work yet. Any general advice/feedback is great, as the form of the song is set in stone.

Thanks!

This is very pleasant to listen to. I like the voicings of your harmonies. This sounds conventional enough to be in film but original enough to create its own style and voice. I think you have struck a nice balance between the known and the unknown, if that makes sense. Very well done!

Sounds great! Must be amazing to here a live band play your music. I think a shaker or similar percussion would sound nice for the section from 3:01 to 3:20. Congrats on the excellent score

11 hours ago, StarCrypt said:

Sounds great! Must be amazing to here a live band play your music. I think a shaker or similar percussion would sound nice for the section from 3:01 to 3:20. Congrats on the excellent score

 

Yeah for sure, I was thinking of adding sandblocks somewhere. Thanks!

Awesome! It sounds very simple, while giving a lot to the ear to grab onto.

On 3/4/2020 at 5:40 PM, Jean Szulc said:

Awesome! It sounds very simple, while giving a lot to the ear to grab onto.

 

Thanks a lot!

What writing program do you use?

On 3/21/2020 at 12:22 AM, jonesy1331 said:

What writing program do you use?

 

 

Sibelius!

EDIT: I have finished this song! In case anyone wanted to see what orchestration things I added/changed. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TmJpzXYXq2I