"Take my hand"

Hi,

I started to compose in the last year or so and I would really like to get some feedback on this piece.

I am trying to compose in a style that could be for a movie or an anime.

thank 🙂

Nice. I like it overall and it would be good to hear it played by an ensemble.

Personally, I don't really feel the off-beat rhythm you have in the accompaniment around 1:30 really jives with the melody as well there. But other than I don't really have any complaints, personally.

I can tell that you're doing your best to prep certain "moments". And it's done pretty well, like around the 2:30 mark.
Your left hand dependence on octaves and fifths of the root is a little tiresome after a while. Since your chord progression primarily employs root motion by step, subversions of this with leaps to inversions or a secondary phrase model would spice things up, as would a change to its overall blocky texture.