Nocturne no. 11 - F Major

Just completed this after spending two months trying to come up with something in F. Decided to experiment a bit here with weird rhythms etc. and don't know if it is a successful use of these things or not. Any advice/feedback is greatly appreciated, cheers.

Also thanks @Tortualex, @maestrowick, @Jean Szulc and @J.Santos for your feedback on my previous Eb min. nocturne. I'll work on the suggested improvements but it will most likely take a while as it take me ages to come up with anything now.

Hey boss, put your name on ALL OF YOUR WORKS!!!!!!

With that being said, I think you can add more.  You can develop your motives even further. I like where this is headed!

Cheers @maestrowick. I'll put my name on, what happens if you don't put your name on works?

Do you mean add more to each variation or add more variations? I won't lie I had to look up what a motive is, I'll certainly try to develop them. Thanks again.