J.Santos Posted March 21, 2020 Posted March 21, 2020 (edited) DELETED Edited April 28, 2020 by J.Santos Quote
Monarcheon Posted March 22, 2020 Posted March 22, 2020 Just two measures that stand out to me. Lack of seventh resolution in m. 11 and the D/G chord at the beginning of 17 making the dominant function sound vacuous. 1 Quote
Left Unexplained Posted March 22, 2020 Posted March 22, 2020 I like it, but it could be more adventurous. That being said, I like that you compose for your instrument and can play it, I think that will serve you very well going forward. 1 Quote
J.Santos Posted March 30, 2020 Author Posted March 30, 2020 On 3/22/2020 at 4:23 PM, Monarcheon said: Just two measures that stand out to me. Lack of seventh resolution in m. 11 and the D/G chord at the beginning of 17 making the dominant function sound vacuous. Thanks!! I've resolved the measure 17, I was supposed to use A there, not G and I didn't even notice it since it was a D major there. For the measure 17 I cannot see where's the seventh is at all. Maybe you had a mistake with the measure number? Quote
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