Storytime - a new composition for violin, cello, and piano

I like the rhythm on the piano. beautiful trio

Generally pretty emotive, especially in the bigger parts. For me, the issue was that the moments of downtime that end and prolongation of those sections is so comparatively low-energy and repetitive in terms of the central rhythm that it becomes monotonous, especially the F pedal section. The central rhythm is much better hidden and purposeful in terms of energy production in the bigger sections, but as the main mode of gap filling it becomes tiresome after a while.