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A little different from what I usually post but I've been kinda liking this scary and chromatic sound recently so I thought I'd come up with a haunting theme for something. I present Jump. Any advice or opinions are welcome. 

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Can't say it's my favorite, but it's decent. How do you feel about it? It feels like it's ... missing something? I mean, if the song is about suicide by jumping (which I gather from the lyrics, lol), then there could be a more definite sense of struggle - "I'm jumping!" vs. "I can't", you know?

You definitely capture uncertainty, for sure 🙂 Not sure what I'd change, but I'd keep plugging away at it because I think you're on the right track for the piece.

Keep it up!

Gustav

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