Yuchanbot Posted April 25, 2020 Posted April 25, 2020 (edited) deleted Edited March 21 by Yuchanbot 1 Quote
Guillem82 Posted April 25, 2020 Posted April 25, 2020 (edited) Hi, it sounds lovely. Very cinematic, catchy motiv and use of nice different textures. I didn't look at the score on detail, but the harmony is definitely rich and well driven. Consistent short piece and very pleasant 🙂 (I played it already 3 times) Edited April 25, 2020 by Guillem82 Quote
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Theodore Servin Posted April 27, 2020 Posted April 27, 2020 Very nice composition! I really like the orchestration and character! I only wished it was a bit longer, as it sounds like it could be a beautiful opening movement to a serenade or sinfonietta for string orchestra. Well done! Quote
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WillRoberts Posted May 4, 2020 Posted May 4, 2020 I agree with Theodore Servin- the final section is very short and seems like it could be a fully developed section. It's also a bit too well separated for my taste- perhaps a linking theme, a more subtle change in pulse or at least a pedal note between the two sections would make them less disjunct? Your melody writing is very fluent though and as others have said the texture is well handled, well done. 1 Quote
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