Seaside Dreaming

Seaside Dreaming Master.mp3

Hi guys

I'm new to this site and I would appreciate feedback on this piece I've composed. Thanks.

That's indeed a nice dreamy pieces, but it feel a bit strange that you finish in a different key you started with. You start in EM and you finisch in DM, right? Why?

Hi there, thanks for listening and commenting. I changed the key because there is an A7 chord at around 2:35 to resolve to DM and to make the DM section a bit different from the EM section

Beautiful and moving piece, Aled. Everything made perfect sense... until that jarring dim7 progression at 2:17 that took us down a whole step to D minor. I'm absolutely not opposed to shaking things up, even in a piece as smoothly legato as this one, but perhaps your transitional passage could turn us out in a higher key than what we started in? Just a suggestion.

You definitely have a knack for composition and know how to turn out a good piece of music. Thanks for sharing.

Hi, thanks for the nice comments! And yes, that is a fair criticism listening back to it, so I'll keep it in mind and thanks for the suggestion.

Sounds pretty good to me, I'm not sure how you could improve it.

Thanks!