Die Stimme der Geige - The Voice of the Violin

Hallo!

This is a work I spent a little while working on and is quite short for Violin, with Piano accompaniment. Audio is computer generated and broken around 1:30. As always, feedback and critique are greatly appreciated.

Danke! (Thank you)

p.s. I don't speak very much German so don't bother trying to communicate to me in it.

Die Stimme klingt ziemlich chaotisch. 

The violin feels too random to me. There's no real semblance of a theme to latch onto and not enough rests: It's kinda just go, go, go all the time.

Not bad advice from the above. I'd add that hammering the tonic at the beginning and end up each bar makes the whole thing feel too claustrophobic.