Writing my first sonata

I am writing my first sonata. This is just the bginning. I hope you listen and give me suggestions (listen until the music stops; the rest is draft).

I really like this! There's a great energy to it. I think one thing that I didn't like is the constant stopping, it sort of diffuses the energy that you build up with the 16th notes.  

18 hours ago, wesleymiller said:

I really like this! There's a great energy to it. I think one thing that I didn't like is the constant stopping, it sort of diffuses the energy that you build up with the 16th notes.  

 

Thank you! Exactly. This is the thing that I and everyone who listened to it don't like. The problem is that if I changed this I would have to write it all over again.

Why not revise it?

8 minutes ago, wesleymiller said:

Why not revise it?

 

I meant if I deleted the stops, it wouldn't sound good (it would sound continuos and not in a good way I think). So I think I will have to delete some passages or replace them.