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This will definitely sound very "old music theory"-like of me, but the parallel octave structure between the bass and the high violin is a little unnecessary, especially since the violin is moving so fast. There's a lot of sonorities to explore there!

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4 hours ago, Monarcheon said:

This will definitely sound very "old music theory"-like of me, but the parallel octave structure between the bass and the high violin is a little unnecessary, especially since the violin is moving so fast. There's a lot of sonorities to explore there!

 

Agreed. Great start though, you have a musical voice, I'm excited to hear where you take this one. Is it complete or is it a work in progress?

Awesome job so far, keep me updated!

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A few notes for this one:

1. You might want to use more than two chords.

2. Melody, for me, came in too late.

3. It sounds as if you built into a point then looped the exact same bars underneath the melody.

4. It's too short thus not giving any place for thematic development.

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