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Here's a cello piece I've been working on for a while. I still have a lot to learn when it comes to composing and mixing orchestral music so any feedback will be much appreciated! 😄

 

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Very beautiful, full of longing. Is it all celli? How many? Around 1'00" it suddenly looses the same level of artistic quality for a moment. Definitely take a look at those few bars. Do you have the music written out? I'm not sure that the orchestral filling at 1'34" helps. At 1'40" are you sure that you want that harmony? It sounds slightly out of place. Check the notes. I hope you don't mind my commenting. I wouldn't dare unless the musical material was worth the while. Great job! Polish it and you'll have a great short piece.

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