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I wish you had used some tempo changes or chords foreign to the key you're in to bring some more contrast to the music.  Honestly, the melody sounds like you were just putting down notes.  It would benefit your music much if you could whistle or sing the melody after you hear it.  But that's just my opinion.

13 hours ago, PaperComposer said:

I wish you had used some tempo changes or chords foreign to the key you're in to bring some more contrast to the music.  Honestly, the melody sounds like you were just putting down notes.  It would benefit your music much if you could whistle or sing the melody after you hear it.  But that's just my opinion.

 

Thanks for listening , and expressing your thoughts.