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What do you think? Should I continue...

 

It's incomplete, of course. All is based on a PC set (except the very first chords)...

It's in Concert Pitch...

 

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I'm confused.  It says it's for piano and orchestra in the title of the score but there isn't a space for the piano in the actual score ... ???  I checked to make sure that your harp part is actually playable without the player having to change a pedal in the middle of the phrase.  I actually like the harp part the best.  The beginning chords are also quite soothing somehow.  There are lots of weird angular melodies in this especially in the flute.  It creates a kind of tense atmosphere.  Overall I liked this!  Looking forward to the completed version.

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2 hours ago, PaperComposer said:

I'm confused.  It says it's for piano and orchestra in the title of the score but there isn't a space for the piano in the actual score ... ???  I checked to make sure that your harp part is actually playable without the player having to change a pedal in the middle of the phrase.  I actually like the harp part the best.  The beginning chords are also quite soothing somehow.  There are lots of weird angular melodies in this especially in the flute.  It creates a kind of tense atmosphere.  Overall I liked this!  Looking forward to the completed version.

 

Sorry, it was intended for piano and orchestra but I rejected it. Only orchestra.but I'll ry to work on a general design (alternative form) first, then I'll go on writing. Thanks for your time.

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Yes, complete it! 

Just like @PaperComposer I quite like the harp part, it adds a lot to the atmosphere of the piece and somehow creates a lot of cohesion between the parts. 

I feel like this uses the timbre of each instrument in a way that is too straight forward to my taste. Maybe you could achieve more by combining more instruments at a time to patch the gap between the sections, and come up with "new" soundscapes. Now, that's not necessary in any manner, just trying to give any meaningful feedback.

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3 hours ago, Jean Szulc said:

Yes, complete it! 

Just like @PaperComposer I quite like the harp part, it adds a lot to the atmosphere of the piece and somehow creates a lot of cohesion between the parts. 

I feel like this uses the timbre of each instrument in a way that is too straight forward to my taste. Maybe you could achieve more by combining more instruments at a time to patch the gap between the sections, and come up with "new" soundscapes. Now, that's not necessary in any manner, just trying to give any meaningful feedback.

 

Thanks, I agree with the timbre issue, it is something in mind, since this was just an intro exposition of raw material.

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