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Very nice. I like when simple motives works nicely without extra ornamentations and that's a clear exemple of that.

Also the arrangement flute-cello and the deceptive cadence to extend the closing in four extra bars feels very appropiate.

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I don't see anything wrong with this, this is nice!

One minor thing I would change is in measure 21, I wouldn't repeat the same melodic pattern for the 3rd time. 

It is a "unwritten" rule that I learned in music theory. While its advised to not repeat it for a 3rd time, there is nothing wrong with it.

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