DanJTitchener Posted September 10, 2020 Posted September 10, 2020 A relatively short and sedate second movement to my G minor piano sonata. Hope you enjoy it. 2 Quote
Rabbival507 Posted September 18, 2020 Posted September 18, 2020 Notationwise- you should use several voices instead of one voice with slurs. Regarding harmony- *you might want to use more daring intervals rather than sixths and thirds all the time. I saw some seconds too, but some more could give you... more spice. *You come back to the tonic in it's most complete and basic form far too often in my opinion. You might want to travel around a bit, maybe even transpose, end on different tonics or maybe a tonic with the "wrong" bass note, just to give the feeling that "we're not done here just yet". About that: I believe that: 1. this should be more accurately notated as you have a bass clef but the notes appear on the treble's lines. 2. you might want to spread the chord in a different way around. (bigger intervals on the lower pitch [could give you a clearer sound], maybe add some notes beyond the basic triad...) Same goes here: You can change the clef in the middle of a line. I did like the journey we went through starting around 1:16, though I expected it to take us somewhere else rather than the beginning. Your choice as the composer, those are simply notes of my opinio' *oh and you might want to consider adding more voices and thinking of the piece as made of different voices (like a piece for a choir) it does sound baroque-ish in a way... Quote
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