I'd like some preliminary feedback on this unfinished piece please!

https://musescore.com/user/30353801/scores/6339912

I've had an idea for a 12 movement piece that is based on each member of the horoscopes. This one is based on Libra. I'd like any feedback you'd be willing to give me, as well as any ideas that you might have for the continuation of the piece. Thank you so much!

Since the astrological year starts at Aries you might (or might not it's up to you) reorder your movements.  In this case Libra would be the seventh sign (not the 9th as your movement is).

I don't know how you should continue this piece - you wrote a pretty conclusive sounding chord at the end.  Sorry if that's not much help. /-:

Omg online it said it was ninth! I need to fix that lmaooo thank you for telling me! And I think I might add something before that chord. I kind of want to get all the parts to like five minutes each, so the whole thing will be an hour long. I might be overreaching my limits though. Anyways, thank you for the feedback!

4 minutes ago, TheCluelessClariney said:

Omg online it said it was ninth! I need to fix that lmaooo thank you for telling me! And I think I might add something before that chord. I kind of want to get all the parts to like five minutes each, so the whole thing will be an hour long. I might be overreaching my limits though. Anyways, thank you for the feedback!

You're welcome!  Libra starts on September 23rd which is the 9th month of the year - maybe that's the source of your confusion?

I think so! 

Too many instruments i unison/octaves makes the contrast of the timbre disappear.

so i should cut down on which parts? The one where its overlapping or the one where its the runs?