DeL Posted September 21, 2020 Posted September 21, 2020 MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Lonely piano > next Quote
Thatguy v2.0 Posted September 22, 2020 Posted September 22, 2020 (edited) Hi DeL Great introduction to your music, and welcome! And it sounds like you recorded yourself playing this? I like the improvisational style of it, kind of reminds me of a scene in a show or movie or something. One piece of advice I could give would be to vary the root position chords in the left hand a bit. Try some inversions for more interesting bass and harmony lines, or giving the left hand the melody. All in all, I hope you stick around, feel free to comment on other's works, I'm sure you'll get more feedback. Well done! Edited September 22, 2020 by Thatguy v2.0 Quote
DeL Posted September 22, 2020 Author Posted September 22, 2020 Yes, i recorded myself improvising. Thanks for the advice, i'll try to improvise better next time 😁 Quote
Thatguy v2.0 Posted September 22, 2020 Posted September 22, 2020 49 minutes ago, DeL said: i'll try to improvise better next time 😁 No one said it was "bad", mate. Just some suggestions on what I think could be improved on 👍 1 Quote
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