Aled Edwards Posted September 30, 2020 Posted September 30, 2020 Hey all, this is kind of a dream pop/rock sort of song I wrote. Let me know what you think and cheers 3 Quote
Papageno Posted November 9, 2020 Posted November 9, 2020 I love it! Would you copy and paste the lyrics to the board the please? Excellent harmony, catchy guitar solo, memorable melody in the voice. I forgot as I was listening that I was in the forum and wasn't listening to the radio. Really impressive! Quote
Aled Edwards Posted November 9, 2020 Author Posted November 9, 2020 Thanks! I'll post them here for you: You are number one, I am number ninety nine You take all the capital, while I manage to scrape by Thought I'd cast a couple votes, but I found that it's in vain I don't even care at all, I don't even wanna bother with that thing Ice is melting, green is showing, swallows in the air Two of us in fantasy land, live without a care Love is timeless, all arounds us, far as I can see Maybe some day I've concluded, this could come to be Always looking for a hit, they've got us hooked on dopamine Now they've got complete control, over our flock it seems We're living in the screen I say, not really in this life I can't keep going on like this, 'cause it causes too much strife Ice is melting, green is showing, swallows in the air Two of us in fantasy land, live without a care Love is timeless, all arounds us, far as I can see Maybe some day I've concluded, this could come to be Quote
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted November 9, 2020 Posted November 9, 2020 I love the alternation between the bVI and bVII in the chorus and the last chorus has a great instrumental outro with some superb solos! (but I miss a fade out as the recording sounds cut off at the end) Great job! 1 Quote
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