In an Italian Garden Waltz

I wanted to dedicate a piece to a loved one, so I composed a waltz in piano. Then I met with an orchestra composer to help me orchestrate it. Please, I would love feedback from this community. It is full of people who can give me their PoV and tell me for example "Trumpets louder would sound better in this part; or make this section softer". 

It is composed of 4 waltzes. The pattern is: 1) D Major; 2) G Major; 3) D Major; 4) G Major; Coda) D Major

Thank you so much!

Little to say about this. Nice. Easy to listen to, the tune and harmonic progressions are all good, so's the scoring and balance, although I felt the bass was a little heavy. 

A good choice of instruments and doubling taking up the tune.

Well done. An accomplished piece.

8 hours ago, Quinn said:

Little to say about this. Nice. Easy to listen to, the tune and harmonic progressions are all good, so's the scoring and balance, although I felt the bass was a little heavy. 

A good choice of instruments and doubling taking up the tune.

Well done. An accomplished piece.

 

Thank you! I'll take it off a bit (the bass).