Aditya's new tune composition

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AyIq_apZTZc&feature=youtu.be

Aditya's new tune composition for review, not sure how to convert it to notes in pdf files

Beautiful and with nice texture, especially with the bass lines, and the melody completes the bass line well in the texture, nice playing. Good articulation.

Although some of the chords or notes doesn't fit in, for example 00:59, 01:07, 01:33 (pedal?), 01:44-01:47 - in modernistic music it could work but not within this style.

It's also better to begin the piece with a tonic, in my opinon.

Aditya is very talented. Keep it up!

12 hours ago, Olov said:

Beautiful and with nice texture, especially with the bass lines, and the melody completes the bass line well in the texture, nice playing. Good articulation.

Although some of the chords or notes doesn't fit in, for example 00:59, 01:07, 01:33 (pedal?), 01:44-01:47 - in modernistic music it could work but not within this style.

It's also better to begin the piece with a tonic, in my opinon.

Aditya is very talented. Keep it up!

 

Thanks Olov for your detailed analysis, will pass on your comments to Aditya.