My New Piece

Hi everyone, New here...

I'm inviting you to listen to my new piece "empty thoughts"

youtube link:

Welcome to the forum!

What a beautiful piece! Its perfect, so dreamy and the visuals really suit the music. I have no criticism except that others may want to look at the score. Its worth the effort because you'll get a more detailed feedback.

What a wonderful piece to begin with!

Welcome, YakoB!

This is a very evocative piece, contemplative and nostalgic. I agree with @DarrenEngland; a score would be helpful.

What kind of feedback are you looking for, by the way?

55 minutes ago, DarrenEngland said:

Welcome to the forum!

What a beautiful piece! Its perfect, so dreamy and the visuals really suit the music. I have no criticism except that others may want to look at the score. Its worth the effort because you'll get a more detailed feedback.

What a wonderful piece to begin with!

 

Thank you so much, I appreciate it and happy that you love it!

I’m sorry but my english is not so good and I'm not really understand what you mean in "others may want to look at the score". Witch score? Can you explain please? 

29 minutes ago, Tónskáld said:

Welcome, YakoB!

This is a very evocative piece, contemplative and nostalgic. I agree with @DarrenEngland; a score would be helpful.

What kind of feedback are you looking for, by the way?

 

Thank you so much, I appreciate it!

I’m sorry but my english is not so good and I'm not really understand what you mean in "score". Witch score? Can you explain me please?

About the feedback, I just wanted to share my new piece with others ears. Im not looking for something specific. If someone feels that he want to say something I will be very happy to hear..

1 minute ago, YakoB said:

Thank you so much, I appreciate it!

I’m sorry but my english is not so good and I'm not really understand what you mean in "score". Witch score? Can you explain me please?

About the feedback, I just wanted to share my new piece with others ears. Im not looking for something specific. If someone feels that he want to say something I will be very happy to hear..

 

Its ok, many people that use this website speak English as a second language so no worries. If we can see the written music then we can talk in more detail but its your decision if you want to share. 

5 minutes ago, YakoB said:

I’m sorry but my english is not so good and I'm not really understand what you mean in "score". Witch score? Can you explain me please?

That is nothing to be sorry for! By "score," I meant the sheet music. You know, this thing:

7 minutes ago, YakoB said:

About the feedback, I just wanted to share my new piece with others ears. Im not looking for something specific. If someone feels that he want to say something I will be very happy to hear..

Very good, then. If you want advice, I'm sure there are many on this forum who can give it. Best wishes!

5 minutes ago, DarrenEngland said:

Its ok, many people that use this website speak English as a second language so no worries. If we can see the written music then we can talk in more detail but its your decision if you want to share. 

 

 

Oh nice to know..

I have no problem to share, I just almost never make a sheets to my music.. But maybe its good time to start write it too, I will do it.

11 minutes ago, Tónskáld said:

That is nothing to be sorry for! By "score," I meant the sheet music. You know, this thing

Very good, then. If you want advice, I'm sure there are many on this forum who can give it. Best wishes!

 

Oh now I'm understanding!

It's good idea, I just almost never write my own music. It's good time to start. I will do it.

Thank you,  Best wishes too.