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I like this but I feel like you limit yourself to only harmonic and melodic variation.  You could also change say .. the tempo or the register at which the individual instruments played.  Correct me if I am wrong but it sounds like you write for the instruments in basically the middle of their range.  Also maybe this piece didn't particularly need a tempo change anywhere but it's just an idea which could really make your music much more diverse even within the span of just one piece.  Of course it's still quite atmospheric and heady.  Thanks for sharing!

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A nice intense atmosphere and interesting harmonies. But surely it's just an intro to something? It naturally wants to lead on from the closing bars.

What happens next, I wonder, and I can't wait to find out!

Great stuff.

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13 hours ago, PaperComposer said:

I like this but I feel like you limit yourself to only harmonic and melodic variation.  You could also change say .. the tempo or the register at which the individual instruments played.  Correct me if I am wrong but it sounds like you write for the instruments in basically the middle of their range.  Also maybe this piece didn't particularly need a tempo change anywhere but it's just an idea which could really make your music much more diverse even within the span of just one piece.  Of course it's still quite atmospheric and heady.  Thanks for sharing!

Ok.. I will ask u more about this later!

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3 hours ago, Quinn said:

A nice intense atmosphere and interesting harmonies. But surely it's just an intro to something? It naturally wants to lead on from the closing bars.

What happens next, I wonder, and I can't wait to find out!

Great stuff.

 

yes mvmt 1! I plan on reintroducing the intro and making it into a 2nd movement

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