Orchestral March

This is the demo version of a graduation-style march I've been working on. It's designed with the same format style as Pomp and Circumstance, so there are a lot of repeated sections. PLEASE feel free to be give suggestions, criticism, and critiques about it. It's far from done and I would love to know how to make it better! Thanks!

Other things aside this seems to be in the wrong meter and tempo for the type of march that you intended here.  The beat is subdivided into 3 which wouldn't be a problem if this were at a higher tempo but then the music might seem rushed.  The subdivisions would force one to march at a duplet to the predominantly triple meter which seems kind of awkward.  It is also kind of slow for a march 😕.