Weird anthem thingy i wrote - pt. 2

ive made it better since i first posted it - 

now id like to think its better...

thanks

Honestly, the main vocal melody you have here is not bad.  The way you have harmonized and orchestrated it could use some work and your choice of instrumentation doesn't help you make this sound filled out harmonically.  You could have arranged this for SATB choir to make it sound fuller imo.  Thanks for sharing!

Lol I was like "hey wtf thats MINE"

I'll give this one a listen as well.

(sighs in relief and smiles) thank you.

Love that snare o' yours 😉