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Hiiiiii! This is just something I've been throwing together for a bit now. I haven't quite settled on a name for it, so any and all suggestions are more than welcome! 

Give it a listen and let me know what you think! All critiques welcome!

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I think you've created a great happy mood with this piece.  I think the drums sometimes don't sound like what a real drum-set player would play.  I am not a drummer myself so can't really help in that regard except to say that maybe there would be more instances of "drum-breaks" where the drummer would emphasize the 1st beat of a given measure with a preparatory break coming from a few beats before that measure that would utilize a larger variety of drums and cymbal crashes that would usually be present in the main beat.  I don't know if I've described what I mean adequately but I think you'd recognize it if you heard it.  Thanks for sharing!

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