Nocturne for Piano

Thanks for any kind of feedback

https://youtu.be/LU8KAbYlMNA

• I really like the harmony in this piece. Using modal mixture feels very fresh and unique.
• My favourite part is m9-14. I think it conveys nocturne for me very well.
• m8 & m38-39 feel too surprising to me. I think they detract from the mood that you carefully built up.
  • I'd feel more comfortable with these if they were developed more in later/earlier sections.
    • I like that m8's idea reappears in m23-24, but they feel too far apart.

Overall I like it, hearing this after midnight really got me in the mood 🙂 

22 hours ago, kwokon987 said:

• I really like the harmony in this piece. Using modal mixture feels very fresh and unique.
• My favourite part is m9-14. I think it conveys nocturne for me very well.
• m8 & m38-39 feel too surprising to me. I think they detract from the mood that you carefully built up.
  • I'd feel more comfortable with these if they were developed more in later/earlier sections.
    • I like that m8's idea reappears in m23-24, but they feel too far apart.

Overall I like it, hearing this after midnight really got me in the mood 🙂 

 

Thank you for listening and sharing your thoughts. I am glad you like it. You are right, maybe I should have prepared a preliminary for m8