BC345 Posted April 6, 2021 Posted April 6, 2021 A melancholic violin tune! Suggestions and critique are welcome! MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu vtune > next 2 Quote
Papageno Posted April 6, 2021 Posted April 6, 2021 Its beautiful. Really relaxing music! I'd liked to have heard the piano play solo for a short while, perhaps it could play the recap of the theme (when its transposed higher) and the violin can join back in just before the phrase ends. 1 Quote
Giacomo925 Posted April 7, 2021 Posted April 7, 2021 it's really beautiful! I agree with papageno. Maybe there is room for more a dialogue between the two instruments. It's a lovely melody. 1 Quote
BC345 Posted April 7, 2021 Author Posted April 7, 2021 Ooh, so the violin sound gets monotonous in longer songs, I see, I see! I should preplan for that next time! :0 Thank you for the comments!! Quote
Papageno Posted April 7, 2021 Posted April 7, 2021 4 hours ago, BC345 said: Ooh, so the violin sound gets monotonous in longer songs, I see, I see! I should preplan for that next time! :0 Thank you for the comments!! Not monotonous, the violin sounds great as it is. Its just that you're not exploiting the possible beauty of dialogue between the instruments which can develop the tension making the return of the theme that more sweet. 1 Quote
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