Luis Hernández Posted May 29, 2021 Posted May 29, 2021 It sounds nice, although it looks as a draft. With passing tones it would be much better. Quote
Vonias Posted May 30, 2021 Posted May 30, 2021 @Gyugcac, Yes!!! Gyugcac, you are ready for the dissonant journey! Adding on what Luis had said, stress the consonants, adding "pop reference" to the sound. Quote
DoYourDailyDuo Posted May 31, 2021 Posted May 31, 2021 Obwohl ich diese Komposition liebe, glaube ich, dass sie von vorbeigehenden Tönen profitieren würde. Ich mag Ihre Verwendung von Vorzeichen, um der Komposition Interesse zu verleihen. Was jedoch die Basslinie betrifft, glaube ich nicht, dass ein Pianist glücklich wäre, wenn er so viele Hilfslinien lesen könnte. Nehmen Sie also vielleicht die Noten mit zu vielen Hilfslinien eine Oktave tiefer. Ich hoffe, mein Feedback ist hilfreich. Vielen Dank! Duo Although I love this composition, I think it would benefit from passing tones. I like your use of accidentals to add interest to the composition. However, regarding the bass line, I don't think a pianist would be happy to read that many ledger lines. So perhaps take the notes with too many ledgerlines down an octave. I hope my feedback is helpful. Many thanks, Duo 1 Quote
Gyugcac Posted June 6, 2021 Author Posted June 6, 2021 On 5/29/2021 at 11:23 AM, Luis Hernández said: It sounds nice, although it looks as a draft. With passing tones it would be much better. Thanks for the kind words Quote
Gyugcac Posted June 6, 2021 Author Posted June 6, 2021 (edited) On 5/30/2021 at 2:29 AM, Vonias said: @Gyugcac, Yes!!! Gyugcac, you are ready for the dissonant journey! Adding on what Luis had said, stress the consonants, adding "pop reference" to the sound. Thanks for the kind words Edited June 7, 2021 by Gyugcac Quote
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