Albayrak Posted May 9, 2021 Posted May 9, 2021 This is a string orchestra piece I wrote to my mother. Thanks for any feedback https://youtu.be/rUmz_OOGOno MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Serenade_for_String_Orchestra > next PDF Serenade_for_String_Orchestra Quote
Ricardo Rochas Posted July 25, 2021 Posted July 25, 2021 Every mother should have there own serenades!!!! This is beautiful! 1 Quote
MJFOBOE Posted July 25, 2021 Posted July 25, 2021 Hi, Maybe I am missing something here; however,I really had some difficulty following the thematic line and harmony in this work. To me it wanders about. It could use some high and low points and obvious resolutions as illustrated by the ending. 1 Quote
Albayrak Posted July 25, 2021 Author Posted July 25, 2021 8 hours ago, Ricardo Rochas said: Every mother should have there own serenades!!!! This is beautiful! Thank you for listening. I am glad you like it 5 hours ago, MJFOBOE said: Hi, Maybe I am missing something here; however,I really had some difficulty following the thematic line and harmony in this work. To me it wanders about. It could use some high and low points and obvious resolutions as illustrated by the ending. Hi, Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I was trying to create a harmonically different atmosphere here.There are no holistically predetermined cadences, so I get what you mean, thanks again also I'm not sure how much it affects the listener, but A=422.5 Quote
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