June 6, 20214 yr A small piano&guitar melody. I tried to keep it short, so it doesn't get too tedious to listen to, hopefully :3
June 6, 20214 yr I like how you avoid the tonic root position triad anywhere you can - it gives your harmonies an always fresh kind of feel. I think you overuse rubato and delay some measures too much - the end is fine but other parts still sound mechanical despite the rubato and it would sound better if it was just played at a regular uninterrupted tempo imo. This piece is very sweet and nostalgic - it reminds me of the music to the original Super Nintendo SimCity. Thanks for sharing!
June 7, 20214 yr Author Mechanical? Hmm, perhaps I should try using more dynamics on piano then. :0 Guess I need to be more gentle with tempo changes as well. Thanks for the comment!
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