piano melody

A small piano&guitar melody. I tried to keep it short, so it doesn't get too tedious to listen to, hopefully :3

I like how you avoid the tonic root position triad anywhere you can - it gives your harmonies an always fresh kind of feel.  I think you overuse rubato and delay some measures too much - the end is fine but other parts still sound mechanical despite the rubato and it would sound better if it was just played at a regular uninterrupted tempo imo.  This piece is very sweet and nostalgic - it reminds me of the music to the original Super Nintendo SimCity.  Thanks for sharing!

Mechanical? Hmm, perhaps I should try using more dynamics on piano then. :0 Guess I need to be more gentle with tempo changes as well. Thanks for the comment!