Bertal piano Posted June 19, 2021 Share Posted June 19, 2021 Hello guys, I think I’ve finally written a complete theme. However I’ve been struggeling the last few days. This is because I am totally lost where I want to go from here. Any ideas would be highly appreciated. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Weezenhof 14 > next 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted June 22, 2021 Share Posted June 22, 2021 You demonstrate an ability to create a very affecting musical theme through the use of varied repetition in this piece. I'm sure you probably felt like the piece almost wrote itself after you had the initial idea for the melody. It's a very bittersweet melody full of longing, regret and yet hope. It's beautifully elaborated upon with figurations which characterize romanticism. I hope you continue it and bring back this main theme after some kind of segue into a contrasting section. Great job and thanks for sharing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJFOBOE Posted July 13, 2021 Share Posted July 13, 2021 I would definitely continue to work on this composition ... I agree I think you could compose a nice contrasting section ... the music seems to lead in that direction. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted July 13, 2021 Share Posted July 13, 2021 I prefer it short as it is. Beautiful, although standard harmonies. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J.Santos Posted July 14, 2021 Share Posted July 14, 2021 Incredibly beautiful piece Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J.Santos Posted July 14, 2021 Share Posted July 14, 2021 Also I agree with Luis, I think it works as short as it is, as a prelude/miniature. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyberPianist Posted July 26, 2021 Share Posted July 26, 2021 A very good and competent composition. It seems from your music that you know Chopin very well. If you haven't listened yet, I can recommend (to broaden your musical experience) to listen to Scriabin's op.11 and also his etudes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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