loneliness

Just a simple sad song I composed. 

Let me know your views :)

Thanks

It's very nice but it seems like it would need 3 hands on the piano.  I guess that's not really a problem though.  I feel like the instrument that enters at 0:43 (don't know what it is ... ???) sounds like it could benefit from some quantization.  It sounds like it's always just a little behind the beat and that actually makes it sound more robotic and mechanical than if you had it just play right on the beat all the time imo.  Thanks for sharing!

This is pretty good. Good build up of instruments, gradually reaching the end. I'm sure you can continue and build upon it for a nice climax, and then finally ending with the piano riff. 

Like Peter said, definitely could use some quantization as I heard some off parts. But overall, I like the mood. Sounds like something from a JRPG. 

@PeterthePapercomPoserThanks for your feedback.. Maybe there is a reverb that's why there is a small delay introduced. I will try to redo it again!!

@Sepharite Thanks for your feedback as well. I am still working on it on the climax. Thanks for comparing it to JPRG 🙂