Luis Hernández Posted August 24, 2021 Share Posted August 24, 2021 RECUERDO.pdfRECUERDO.mp3 MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu RECUERDO > next PDF RECUERDO 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJFOBOE Posted August 25, 2021 Share Posted August 25, 2021 A nice light orchestration .... quite sweet. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vonias Posted August 25, 2021 Share Posted August 25, 2021 Hauntingly beautiful, Luis! I really enjoyed the caveat at the end, the final percussive sounds of the bassoon. The diminished-scale, or half-whole scale, (I'm guessing, reading left of the barline) lead in by the flute, a beautiful highlight! Ruffage effects by the trumpets, please! Growls and glissandos, also a choice selection of mutes, including, one saxophone, I suggèst. 🙂 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tom Statler Posted August 26, 2021 Share Posted August 26, 2021 Nicely done! I have three suggestions: 1. The moving line in the viola in bars 2-3 is lovely but then it's gone. Bring it back elsewhere in the piece. Not too much, but you can use this inner texture to your advantage. 2. The octave unison in the violins and violas from bar 15 to 20 is too overpowering. Get off the long note (or let a single solo violin sustain it) and let some different textures in the winds come through. 3. Last 3 bars, let the trumpet double the timpani only on the last and first eighths of the bar. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted August 26, 2021 Author Share Posted August 26, 2021 22 minutes ago, Tom Statler said: Last 3 bars, let the trumpet double the timpani only on the last and first eighths of the bar. I like that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJW58 Posted August 27, 2021 Share Posted August 27, 2021 Well done. Rather beautiful. A bit short perhaps. More please 😊. A bit too much unison strings. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Left Unexplained Posted October 8, 2021 Share Posted October 8, 2021 nice, love the orchestration. That ending major 7th is heavy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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