Allemande

https://voca.ro/1523IFgdp9WO

Really nice piece! The harmonic progression and the voice leading really appealed to me, and that is the strength of the song, and also the rythmic texture.

I see that you both begin and end with the tonic in the first part of the piece, maybe you could try having a cadence to the dominant before the repeat?

From the middle of the piece, you might want to vary it a little bit. Maybe switch up the melody, so that it has another tonal center. Or you can modulate to something more remote, which can serve the purpose of variation as well. Or you can try experimenting with range, like have the melody or bass line an octave above or below. Again, a very pleasant piece! Nice work

On 10/23/2021 at 10:45 PM, Olov said:

Really nice piece! The harmonic progression and the voice leading really appealed to me, and that is the strength of the song, and also the rythmic texture.

I see that you both begin and end with the tonic in the first part of the piece, maybe you could try having a cadence to the dominant before the repeat?

From the middle of the piece, you might want to vary it a little bit. Maybe switch up the melody, so that it has another tonal center. Or you can modulate to something more remote, which can serve the purpose of variation as well. Or you can try experimenting with range, like have the melody or bass line an octave above or below. Again, a very pleasant piece! Nice work

 

Ty !